Chủ Nhật, 14 tháng 3, 2010

How is a good human ?


Everything has it is two faces :bad face and good face .People also have two kinds of people :good human and bad human .Bad people always do much damage or annoyance for people around ,so they will be hated .In contrast ,we love and admire good humans .A good human usually has a lot of good qualities .

First of all , a good human is very modest .He or she does not show off and brag about himself or herself .He or she does not want to become a centre of people .Athough he or she is smart ,he or she just thinks :"I am also nomal as people around ."He or she learns things modestly and makes him or her more perfect .That is the reason why other people love and feel pleasant when they get in touch with him or her .


Second , he or she is very noble .One does not remember all mistakes of people .He or she is willing to forgive anybody who realize their mistakes . A noble human always gives opportunities for bad people to begin everything again and become good humans .Do you know why he or she does that ?It is just because he or she knows nobody can not make mistake .That makes him or her feel happy and love life more .

Finally ,he or she is very kind and helpful .Whenever he or she sees people have difficuties , one will try his or her best to help them overcome problem .He or she helps poor people without thinking of benefits or repute . In our society ,many people do charity just because they want to be famous or want other people think they are good humans . I hate that kind of people most . On the other hand , a helpful human always feels happy when he or she helps something for people around .

In conclusion ,nowadays if we want to know whether he or she was a good human or not ,we should observe their actions and their behaviour carefullly.Do not depend on their appearances ,we will be misunderstanded !Moreover ,I am sure that you always love and admire good people .Thus ,why do not you become a good human to make other people love and admire you ,too ?

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  1. INTRODUCTION (2ms)
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    BODY (4.5ms)
    - Good ideas 1.8
    - Coherence, unity, development 1.7
    - Language: Grammar, vocabulary (1.5)
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    Everything has it is two faces ----GRAMMAR
    People also have two kinds of people - SEMANTICS??
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