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Everything has it is two faces :bad face and good face .People also have two kinds of people :good human and bad human .Bad people always do much damage or annoyance for people around ,so they will be hated .In contrast ,we love and admire good humans .A good human usually has a lot of good qualities .


Finally ,he or she is very kind and helpful .Whenever he or she sees peopl
e have difficuties , one will try his or her best to help them overcome problem .He or she helps poor people without thinking of benefits or repute . In our society ,many people do charity just because they want to be famous or want other people think they are good humans . I hate that kind of people most . On the other hand , a helpful human always feels happy when he or she helps something for people around .

In conclusion ,nowadays if we want to know whether he or she was a good human or not ,we should observe their actions and their behaviour carefullly.Do not depend on their appearances ,we will be misunderstanded !Moreover ,I am sure that you always love and admire good people .Thus ,why do not you become a good human to make other people love and admire you ,too ?
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Everything has it is two faces ----GRAMMAR
People also have two kinds of people - SEMANTICS??
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