Thứ Bảy, 27 tháng 3, 2010

HOW TO BE HAPPY

Happiness is a feeling that everyone wants to achieve. Everybody has different points of view about happiness.In my opinion ,I feel happy when I satisfy with everything I had already.Now I have a warm family :I am very healthy ,and I am in love and be loved.It looks very simple ,but I am very happy with those things .

First of all,because I have a great grandmother, she makes my life happier .I love her so much .I lived with her when I was a little girl ,so for me she is very important.Whenever I feel sad or disappointed,I always come back my home to stay beside her.It makes me feel peaceful and happy .I was looked after by her before .Now , she gets older ;I feel happy when I can take care of her .Although I can not awlays stay beside all challenges ahead .
Next , health is said to be the most precious thing of human being . I am very healthy and have no serious disease .Therefore , I can do everything I want . In the future , I can work hard to earn a lot of money .Thus ,I can support my family and I also help the poor . If all of members in my family have a full life ,it is my happiness and my dream . Moreover , I also recieve happiness when I can do something to help people arround .
Finally , people usually said that to love and to be loved is the biggest happiness on the earth . It is true that everybody feel happy when thay are in love .So am I .Love makes our life more beautiful and colourful .I am happy when I recieve care from my sweetheart .However, I feel happier when I can share the joy and sadness with him .Love is a marvelous medicine . It makes people have a strong power to overcome all difficuties .
We should find happiness in the world arround us . On someday , we try stopping our busy life and thinking of our childhood .As we were children , we felt very happy .Why do not we feel happy now any more ? It is just because now we want to have everything and not satisfy with things we had . Thus ,we have to try our best to achieve them . We have no time to enjoy this life and know how is happy .In short , we should relax and spend time on enjoying our beautiful life !

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