Thứ Hai, 12 tháng 4, 2010

CHILDREN'S BEHAVIOR

Nowadays, children are taken after very carefully. As we see, most children in the city are fat and cute because their parents buy a lot of milk, candies and food for them .However, most of them are very naughty and violent; their behaviors are worse than it was years ago.
First, children are naughty demons now .They looks very lovely, but when you play with them about an hour, you will feel tired from their characters. If you are a tutor, I’m sure that sometimes you get furious because of your hardheaded students. For example, when you ask them to do exercise, they do not do and draw something on the paper .They think their parents pay money to hire you ,so they needn’t look up to you .Now children prefer playing than studying. It does not like children in the past .We had some famous children who were very interested in studying such as Mac Dinh Chi .He caught night-flies to get light and study .It was a good model for children.
Today, children are very violent .They are affected by seeing violent movies .Most little children would like to see a lot of films about superman .After that, they imitate violent actions in the films. Instead of playing traditional games, they ask their parents to buy plastic swords and guns. Day by day, it becomes their characters. When they grew up, they always want to fight with the other people .For example, when they see the other boys or girls whose faces they do not like, they will hit those boys or girls for no reason.
Although now children are more lovely and smarter than it was in the past, but their behaviors are worse. Now children do want to obey adults and their parents, they want to do everything they like. Thus, they are not good children .In many years ago , children were educated carefully .Therefore ,they always looked up to people around .They used to play traditional games with their friends ,so they had good relationship ,too. They were good children.
Now the relationship between people and people are paler .That is the reason why makes children’s behaviors bad. The parents are busy with job, so they have no time to educate children .Moreover; they let children see violent movies .It is harmful for children’s character. In short, parents should care children and educate them carefully because children will become the owner of the society in the future.

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  1. Now children prefer playing than studying. It does not like children in the past - GRAMMAR
    hardheaded students --MEANING?

    INTRODUCTION (2ms)
    - Background, hook 0.8
    - Thesis statement 0.7
    BODY (4.5ms)
    - Good ideas 1.6
    - Coherence, unity, development 1.5
    - Language: Grammar, vocabulary (1.4)
    CONCLUSION (2ms)
    - Summarize (0.8)
    - Lesson, suggestions (0.9)
    Total: 7.8

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